Thats a really good poem really sad 2 i would hate to have a broken relationship with my brother

That was really good! I liked it. It said so much and had so much anger in it! You are very good. Thank you so much for commenting!
Burning~Wings

Hi, this is a great poem. Made me cry and think about my older brother. He used to be my best friend, trusted him with everything I said and did but one day he changed just like that and hurt the whole family. He isnt the person he used to be and that kills because I love him so much but I want nothing to do with him. Great poem!! xxx Feel free to check out my poems there's a few to my older brother.

This is a really GOOD poem. it reminds me of me and my Big Brother's friendship..one month he really likes to hang out with me and the other he treats me like shit and tells people lies about me..but anywho good poem!!