This is a really good poem. It made me cry there is so much feeling in it. I know how you feel. Just be strong.

I don't know whether to be happy that I made you cry with my poem, or feel bad because my poem made you cry. I have another one, about the same incident sorta, but from 6 years on and about moving on. I'll post it up later.

It sounds odd, saying that a poem about this kind of event is absolutly wonderful, but i think it is. i too, have lost, and as time goes on the pain seems to dull. its perfect, and i love it, keep writing!