Insanity

by TINSLEY   Dec 30, 2006


She saw she liked she tried she loved she looked she wanted, now I cant see what she saw,
Now I cant see what she wanted, now I cant have her and she cant have me, now we're stuck
In the same old place never moving from it, taking pain taking love taking u, stopping my heart
with every time I see her, not knowing how she really felt about me, braking all sanity left taking
every piece love stolen from those who need it most, standing on all things that appear smaller,
Making life useless and making
love dead, you are the heartless demon of insanity.

TINSLEY xXx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nice write. I loved it, however; the structure needs a lot of work, perhaps stanzas would help. Other than that great job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Very good poem, 5/5
    I can also feel some anger at the end of your poem...which i liked ;0