Comments : Insanity

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Very good poem, 5/5
    I can also feel some anger at the end of your poem...which i liked ;0

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nice write. I loved it, however; the structure needs a lot of work, perhaps stanzas would help. Other than that great job.

    Peace, Joe