Still Here

by TRAGiC BEAUTY   Dec 31, 2006


You said "Let's play hide and seek"
I agreed right away
"Of course I will
I love that game!"

So you said, "I hide first."
I said, "And I'll count."
So you ran and hid
I had no doubt

I counted to fifty
And stepped away from the tree
I looked for you a lot
I think you ran away from me

"Hello, hello, where did you go?"
I looked for you histerically
I do not think you're hiding
You took advantage of me

I'm standing here cold and hungry
And my eyes are starting to tear
Cos since that time we played hide and seek
I'm still looking for you here

You left me and I'm waiting
Why'd you have to go
You knew I was vulnerable
It's something everyone knows

But I've looked in nooks and crannies
But you never showed up, it causes me pain
Do you even remember the sad girl
You left standing in the rain

I miss you so much babe
Why'd we ever have to play
This dumb thing of hide and seek
Boy, now I hate this game

I thought that you were hiding
But you never came back around
So now I'm done looking for you
And I'm just sitting on the ground

(No idea where this came from! lol)

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Great job! So glad you added more. It's so good! Thanks for your sweet comment. And honestly, I'm shocked you took my advice...! But THANKS! It's so cool!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Oh this almost sounds sad, like you could make it longer and expound on some lost love who always leaves you. Man I loved that ending! I know you prob meant this to be funny but at the end I could just see this lonely girl their in the rain looking for this boy, and then almost picture her at like 17 still looking and him still being the same old jerk. You know? Man, you should do that! lol !
    Seriously!
    Charisma*