by IdTakeABulletForYou Dec 31, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
And here we stand, as lovers; |
by Jenni Marie
I really enjoyed this...very moving and intense, flow was good for the most part but there were times when I thought it was a little off. |
by Robert
The rythm scheme was off abit but the message was right in your face. I liked how you boldly expressed your distain for the other person it was well writen in that manner. All and all it was good I would have rythmed it abit more to keep the flow going but it was a good read. ok this is the 5th poem and now I will e-mail you with my over view hope you can take it. Plot121 |
I love this poem keep writing, i love to read your work. 5/5 |
by HUGIYDAWY
Nice poem.... very well written keep up the great work!! |
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