by Michelle18 Dec 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love is never a game to me, |
by Sandra D
Oh My Gosh!!! that reminds me of my me and my bf!!! that's crazy! you're an awesome writer, this is amazing!! 5/5!! |
by Bryan
This is a very good poem, it would help though if you capitalized the i's and the begiining of a sentence, but overall this is beautifully writen, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
This is a good poem, but the double spaces makes the poem seem too long and endless! |
Good luck with him. Great emotion and heart. Trust is key. Lovely piece. |
Love is the only thing that can break a heart and make it better, and trust is everything in a relationship excellent write 5/5 |