by Michelle18 Dec 31, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
One hot summer day in july, |
by missy
Aawwwhhh, so sweet and happy. Great poem, keep writing! |
by Jenni Marie
I really liked this, it made me smile. |
Aww. That was very well written. Good flow, emotion, depth, and heart. Nice work. I'll keep a look out for other poems that come out. Good luck with everything and Happy New Year. |
This is a really nice poem, family is always there to help us find our way home if ever we get lost and if there not they shouldn't be considered family excellent job 5/5 |
by Mousie
Aww omg i loved it!!! it was perfect, i loved it, i thought of my sister the whole time!! great job 5/5 |