Great job.

Hey hun this was very well written i like the idea behind it. a very powerful and touching poem. ive written one similar if u want to check out. neway hope uve been doin ok. plz email me sometime neway cya xx

Madddyyy!
I really like this one, and i like how the first and last verses are the same, it really fits in well with the rhyme.
haha, i always love your writing and you know it!
kaitlynx.