Wow you really can tell you love the one this is written for. good job!

The rhyme is excellent, its such an orignial authentic piece and its so sweet. i can tell you spent time on this making it perfect. i love this piece. cant wait to read more.

lissa

Wow!! this is good. you must really love this girl. keep showing your love, it's good. and keep writing, cuz this is awesome!!:)

Nicley written