by Michelle18 Dec 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Im laying in bed thinking about you, |
by Galldora
I really enjoyed this poem! |
This is pretty good for not a recently submitted piece. Tons of people probably have this problem you have written about. Everything is good - overall, good job. |
This is so sad... |
by steve
Very sweet, great flow and rhythem5/5 it rolls off the tongue |
Hi, i like this poem, but may i ask, why do you ALWAYS but double lines between your verses? just for once put them back2back, it makes it easier to read |