by Cindy
I really like the way you ended this with a unanswered question. Good job! |
by NATiVEMAMA16
I absolutely [LOVE] this poem... i feel this exact way right now with my best guy friend and this poem expresses exactly how i felt but couldn't get out... this poem is a 5 all the way =] |
by Stephanie
I too have the same problem and it totally sucks. =[ Love how you ending the poem too. Wonderful job overall! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Beautiful and i no the feeling. you poems are strong and the emotion is nicely set. great word choice. 5/5. |
by Bryan
Besides some grammer mistakes this is a awsome poem, loved the flow, give it a 5/5!!!! keep making them this good!!!! |
by Mousie
Very good poem, i really enjoyed it, you're a good writer, lots of talent... the flow and wording was great, what a cute and heartfelt poem. 5/5 |
Hi, i like this poem, but may i ask, why do you ALWAYS |
Hi, i like this poem, but may i ask, why do you ALWAYS but double lines between your verses? just for once put them back2back, it makes it easier to read |
by steve
Very sweet, great flow and rhythem5/5 it rolls off the tongue |
This is so sad... |
This is pretty good for not a recently submitted piece. Tons of people probably have this problem you have written about. Everything is good - overall, good job. |
by Galldora
I really enjoyed this poem! |