Say your goodbyes

by Michelle18   Dec 31, 2006


Verse one

when days turn to night,

you wont hear my voice.

i dont think its right,

but i dont have a choice.

i\'ve made up your mind,

since you cant make up your own.

im wasting my time so im leaving you alone

chorus

theres nothing you can do, nothing you can say to keep me here like before,

you can change your ways, say what you wanna say, but i aint coming back no more.

im not gonna be your fool anymore,

cuz pain was the one thing i wasnt looking for.

so say your goodbyes now,

cuz i\'ll no longer be around.

this is actually a song that i wrote. its not finished yet but tell me what you think of it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm i hope i can heard the melody.. the lyrics was nice.. the meaning was also beautiful seems an inspiring piece! great emotions... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by FREEtoFLY

    That is AMAZiNG, may i say that you are my favorite author on this entire site! you have something going for you! keep it up!
    50000/5 :)
    <3-pArxBeAr

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that it is great so far I hope that you finish it soon. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Tell me when its finished I loved it i wish there was more your so greaT!

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    Nice beginning of song...
    can't wait to see the rest..
    thanks for comments on my poems =)