Finish it!! lol
You got me wanting more, you have a great opening and although i don't know the tnue, the chorus seems catchy.
Excellent
5/5
*Gem*

I agree, I can't wait until it's finished. Love the emotions portrayed in this one, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I love lyrics and these are very good, i would like to read it when your done writing them, its a 5/5!!!

It was really good..But hurry up and finish it ...when you finish it tell me please...5/5 keep it up.

Nice beginning of song...
can't wait to see the rest..
thanks for comments on my poems =)

Tell me when its finished I loved it i wish there was more your so greaT!

I think that it is great so far I hope that you finish it soon. 5/5

That is AMAZiNG, may i say that you are my favorite author on this entire site! you have something going for you! keep it up!
50000/5 :)
<3-pArxBeAr

Hmm i hope i can heard the melody.. the lyrics was nice.. the meaning was also beautiful seems an inspiring piece! great emotions... 5/5