She ended her life

by Michelle18   Dec 31, 2006


Sitting alone looking around,

nothing moves or makes a sound.

no love, freedom or happiness,

just sadness and tears that led to all of this.

no tv to watch, no music to hear,

the only thing she looks at is a tiny glass mirror.

i wonder who is this girl gazing back at me,

is it someone i know or a stranger to be.

this isnt the same girl that i know,

the girl i know wouldnt stoop so low,

as to let herself get used and called such nasty names,

she wouldnt let him play so many mind games.

she wouldnt let him mess with her heart,

and do everything in his power to tear it apart.

the girl i dont know thinks about ending her life,

and tonight she ended it because she didnt think she lived it right.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Great imagery and its sad too. I liked the rhyming except the last line - a little forced. But still good, the other lines make up for it. =)
    she wouldnt let him mess with her heart
    and do everything in his power to tear it apart.
    Fave lines ^^
    ~ Lainey

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awh this i sad but really good!

  • Wow, great use of words...
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job, great emotions. You can improve by adding more imagery and descriptive words. Keep it up, thanks for reading my poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I liked the rhymes in this poem, they were quite clever. Another sad write, looking forward to reading more sometime.