by aDORKable x3 Dec 31, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
She washes the makeup off her pillowcase |
Nothing aches more then a heartbreak. You write them very well I hope you know. yes you do! Great write. |
by Jenni Marie
I LOVE this!! |
Woah. again, amazing. spectacular. wow. i hope someday i can look back onto my ex and i like this. you really showed this iff beautifully. the detailing, was amazing. you could really sense her pride in herself enough to let him go...wow. again, speechless. u did that to me w/ every poem, amazing. 5/5..again lol |
by donna
A very nice inspirational poem... It was written superbly and I really enjoyed reading this excellent poem... A poem I think a lot of people can or will relate to at some point in their life... Well done 5/5 xx |
Interesting and I'm glad it seems like she is better off without him. Being with someone is supposed to make you both feel better not stifled or upset in any way, so I'm glad that the person in your poem realised that, and I loved the way it was presented. Not to harsh or sutle. Very interesting, and the topic was something that I don't normally see to often. take care. |