I'M GOING THRU THE SAME PROMBLEM. THE ONLY DIFFERENCE IS THAT I'M STILL LIEING. BUT I LIKE THE POEM. BUT I THINK U'LL GET MORE PPL ATTENTION IF IT RHYME MORE

Thats realyl net usually you dotn hear of people telling sumone they dont love sumone when they do, so that was a neat twist on this. it was so reall all ur poems are and that what makes me want to read more. best of luck wit this gurl. keep writin. pls comment sum of more of my stuff if you can. thnxs.

lissa