Over the years

by bon   Dec 31, 2006


Through all the smiles, laughter and tears

We've been through it all..over the years

As time goes on and as we grow

We think of all the fun..and the things we know

And stupid things that seemed smart

All the pain that came from the heart

Through all the fights, and long lasting frowns

Through all the s* that brought us down

So now I say, with an open heart

Through all the years, we wont part

We'll stick together..hopefully as one

And look back on the things we've overcome

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked really well, and I enjoyed the imagery and wording used.
    A wonderful poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's cute. ^_^

    The flow I found was much better in this one, and the topic was wonderful. I prolly like it so much because it resembles my life and my friends. I see that you have friends of your own and you care for them so much. It takes a real guy to be able to do that.

    Anyhow, back to the poem. As I said before, the flow was better in this one, but could still use some work. No one's perfect.

    The rhymes were also considerably better in this one, and it made me think more into the topic than just the writing here on this computer screen. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww how sweet!! wonderful! i like it alot.

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