Awww how sweet!! wonderful! i like it alot.

Aww it's cute. ^_^

The flow I found was much better in this one, and the topic was wonderful. I prolly like it so much because it resembles my life and my friends. I see that you have friends of your own and you care for them so much. It takes a real guy to be able to do that.

Anyhow, back to the poem. As I said before, the flow was better in this one, but could still use some work. No one's perfect.

The rhymes were also considerably better in this one, and it made me think more into the topic than just the writing here on this computer screen. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I loved this.
I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked really well, and I enjoyed the imagery and wording used.
A wonderful poem.