Wow thats all i can say and thanks for my comments and ratings.

bianca.

Another excellent poem. Look forward to readng more of your work.

I luved this one. it was great keep it up!

That's a really good poem. Thanks for rating mine, I like the criticism and stuff. Yours I've read so far are great.

That was beautitful! Well done.
You really let your emotions and feelings out so wonderfully.
Your use of words brought the poem together and really made it great.
Keep up the great work.
Thank you so much for the comments.
5/5 God Bless

~Tay~

Wow, nice rhyming..and good use of the words. looking forward to reading more of your work, keep writing!

It was very interesting and beautiful in it's own way. I'm going to have to read all the rest of your now! ;)
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Rainy Washington

It's a good poem but it's not really my style
greetz

Thank you for he comment. Hopefully some of my poems will be.

Ahh i want more. =[

make it longer!

i really liked this one. it was so heartfelt and sad, but sweet at the same time..

one suggestion: the title- thoughout the whole poem it says memories, but the title is memory. it makes no sense.. i think it should be changed to Kissing Memories.. or something....

Truly I agree. But. It is "One" memory. Not a bunch of kisses with the same girl. It is "One" memory in "One" night. That is why it is "A Kissing Memory". Thank you truly for your critique.

That was great it had alot of emotion into it~
It's truly GREAT!
Good job 5/5

Thank you.

That was rilly sweet and yet sad i like it...lol
4/5

That was really good.I like your work.I just started reading it.

Kelsie

Well damn, I can not find one single thing I don't like about that poem. After all the poems I have been reading lately, that was just astonishing. You used just a touch of descriptive words, not over-doing it.

I really liked how you used the "Alas" and the "shall's". In most poems dots seem to take away from the poem, but I really think they add to this one.

It's a sad poem, but you don't think sad when you read it. You think beautiful, and grace. Maybe that's just me, but this really was an exquisite poem. Very well done.

Keep writing!
Cayce

W-O-W. um yeah, wow.