by DeathlyAmore Dec 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
What is the use pretending |
Nicely done. The last part just didn't really match the whole rhythem of the poem and the flow.You used aaaa instead of what I saw in your other stanzas abcb. Still a wonderful poem. |
by Freddie
I agree. very descriptive. i luved it. keep writin! |
by Cindy
Wow excellent job on your poem. very descrptive. Loved reading it! |