by Tylor Dent Dec 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
As you walk past me my heart suddenly melts. |
That was so sweet and you lead up to CANT LOOK AWAY thats a great style nad makes the reader hang on to the end of them poem. very nice job here one of my favs of urs. keep it up bud. |
by COCO
IT'S KINDA NOT GOOD, CUZ I DONT FEEL THE PASSION IN IT 4/5 |