Hey... i liked it but it wasnt like a poem dat had rhythm or a pattern but i know exactly where ur coming from:P

Wow! This is *gorgous*! The emotion leads you up to think that your happy, and then *BOOM* it's gone! This is amazing!
5/5
xoxo

I honestly cried reading this, ur amazing at making up quotes/poems and i think ive rated everyone one of em a 4 or 5!

I absolutly LOVE this poem...its all i want. I just want a guy who's not there to play with your heart then break it once he's done. You don't know how many times i've cried at night thinking ill never have that I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE YOUR POEMS KEEP WRITING :)

Greatest Appreciation,
- sara

Thanks jessie, i keep my hopes up. i really like this guy but our reationship is hard to explain. im hoping for the best of things :)
Keep writing,
Always♥
~*sara~*

Yeh..i read all ur quotes too, and cried on a few! but ur quotes and poems AMAZE me sooo much, ur really good! keep it up! and i hope ull get better with ur whole relationship dealy! kk ttull
**steph

This is so... wow. I really red it thinkin: aawww hot cute! ^^
Keep it up!

Hot = How xD