Awwww Cindy, this is very beautiful. I like your nice love poems. Slightly poignant, but sweet at the same time.
Great job, good flow and vivid imagery. 5/5

Yes very vivid imagery! Beautiful poem for a deserving husband. I wish we could turn back time too........5/5

I agree! that was great!!! Keep writing u rok!

Very nice sad poem but may i say there is no life without death sorry it's life law sorry again

Thanks for the compliment. It means a lot. And you have some very beautiful here. This one expresses a lot. Thanks again and I hope we stay in touch.

I love how you started each stanza with 'If I could turn back time'. Brought something extra into the poem. I, too wish that we could turn back time. =[ Fantastic poem that you have written here, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Awwww how sweet. i love it!! excellent job.keep writing!

If I could turn back time
I would capture the image of your face
The sparkle in your eyes, the dimple in your chin
The way each and every freckle had it's place.

I really loved this stanza..for some reason, really. It touched me.
Great job!

This is another very good poem, great job cynthia, loved the flow, 5/5!!! keep up the good poems!!!

Just GREAT!!!!!!!!!

You can feel the love,longing and devotion pouring from every word. 5/5

This is truly beatufull! it was wonderfully described! and excellent flow! i love it!

This is a very lovely poem. This poem reminded me of a book I have read before called; P.S. I Love You. (I forgot who the author was)...
I just wanna say I hope the New Year brings you more joy and love.
Happy New Year =)

Yet another wonderful write. I loved it. The imagery was outstanding in this poem. The flow as well as the structure was good as well. Keep on writting, you are very talented.

Peace, Joe

Beautiful cindty. just fabulous. i loved it, and it reminded me of my poem, a time machine.

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hmm."do you ever have that feeling where you want to turn back time."

This was beautiful...breathtaking imagery.
I thought this flowed very well, and I enjoyed the wording muchly.

This is such a greatpoem.. its so descriptive and really shows a strong emotion... i love how every stanza begins with the same line.. its adds a nice touch.. however.. some lines are really long and disrupt the flow of the poem

I wish i could turn back time sometimes, even if it is just to erase the bad times or even take back something i've said, but most of all i would love to turn back time if it meant one more hug..
Excellent poem hun, you've really touched my heart with this one.
5/5
*Gem*

Nobody can turn the time , my dear Cindy ... Be strong! The life is going on !
I wish u the best !

Mariana

Cindy this is a wonderful poem
extremely heart rending
5/5 take care xx