There are times when the flow is a little off but it was a very sweet poem nevertheless. very endearing. Must have been a very strong love!
I wanted to thank you for all the comments you provide. They always make me feel good, and if ever you have suggestions feel free to offer. Thanks again!
Charisma*

I like this one... because im kinda like this person... i would go back just to be with this one guy...

Exquisite write, beautifully done, excellent job!!!

Cindy, i just love your poems, i really do and i you have talent, a talent that i could never have, your work seems so effortlessly written, with so much power behind every line
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well done
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We all take things for granted and it's terrible that we don't make the most of our time with people, because we'll never know when they'll be gone. Amazing poem 5/5

Beautifully written.....
I can see what is coming out.....
so strongly.....As has been said by all the comments....you had something very special....very close these words
and has great impact I am sure for many out there.....

Rate? How can you rate this!!!
off the scale....Love is......

This is such a touching poem about love. you pieced it together so well and your words are so powerful. 5/5

Thanks for comment on my poems...
your one of my favorites
you are so talented
I like this poem it's really what I want right now...
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Magic beyond words.

Love this one, i like the repetition in the stanzas, its a good style and works well with this one, great work xxxxx