GOODBYE

by Tamsin   Dec 31, 2006


Can't you see me bleeding?
Silently I'm grieving
My soul you've ripped apart
I cannot feel my heart
I'm unworthy and pathetic
I'm damaged, don't you get it?
I do not show my fears
Let alone my tears
I realised there's no reason
Because depression's in this season
I just recite my lines
Ignoring all the signs
Until it gets too deep
The road it gets too steep
The pain is so much more
Than I've ever felt before
Every time you hurt me
You simply fail to see me
Inside I feel it tenfold
Until my heart gets too cold
That's when I back out
I leave without a shout
Just this simple note
I spared the time and wrote
To help you understand
I needed a helping hand
But you were never there
You didn't want to hear
That is why I'm going
I'm tired of you not knowing
Goodbye...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jennycartoke

    Hey, you commented on one of my poems, so I decided to get yours out.
    I read a few of them, and I really like this one a lot.
    The first 2 lines, I find are so powerful, there's no way you can read them, without reading the whole poem.
    You did a really good job. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Wow thats really good
    i relate to it aswell

    keep on writing its really touching.