Caged love

by Brook   Dec 31, 2006


Distance means everything
In this relationship;at our age
Our hearts holding each other back
Love being held in a cage

Impossible to know
Exactly what is wrong or right
This love we feel
For which we surely have to fight

Forbidden is so much sweeter than given
Hiding; sneaking away
Waiting for our time to come;
When all should be okay

Damage being done to hearts
Not able to be undone
It seems this game we played so well
We have not yet won

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dan Ryan

    Forbidden is so much sweeter than given. Great line. Whole poem flowed well, excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    The memories of the unforbiden love. Always made it that much more sweet. I remember this age. Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is really really good.keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    Awww...so sad! luved it tho! u shud keep writing! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Alright. You see, I was just going to read a random poem of yours so I could ask you to read one of mine.. that was the plan. But the first verse.. I've been in the exact same situation. EXACTLY. I started to read it, and it hit me hard how easy it was to understand. That was really really a good read.

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