Wow. I can't even say anything about this one! its so great! Original concept, and it flows very well. I love it; seriously. Amazing job. Definitely 5/5! Keep it up!

Wow, very nicely written unique poem, you have a great style and talent, keep it up, a 5/5 from me.

This is great.i like it.good job.

Very nice job on the poem. I like the way you ponder the diffrent things on your way to the restaurant. Nicely done.

This is a real good poem! i love it! keep up the good work!

Narc xxx

Again a unique poem. It had a great flow and great discription. I really enjoyed this, i really like the fact that it had soo much meaning and was really deep. The structure is good, and the lanuage was outstanding! Keep up the great work! xx