Hold My Hand

by Delie   Dec 31, 2006


Hold My Hand

The time of the world to end,
Was near...
Everybody left me,
In fear...

In the darkness,
Of that night...
You held my hand,
Very tight...

You stayed by my side,
Never letting go...
Then the voice stopped...
We were alive! Aho!

And in your arms,
Very tight...
I felt safe, once again,
That night...

I cried in your arms,
What seemed like forever...
You wiped my tears,
And everything was better...

If the world would've ended there,
At least I'd've died in your arms...
Those that held me tight,
In the middle of that night...

...in a DREAM

**dreamt on the night of the 28. December 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I loved the repitition of the word night and words that rhymed with it, this technique brought a unique sense of rhythm to the poem. Thanks for the comments, and I really like your work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel

    WOW!! i LOVED this poem, it;s amazing and has a great flow. my fav. stanza was:

    I cried in your arms,
    What seemed like forever...
    You wiped my tears,
    And everything was better...

    keep up the good work ur very talented. i;d love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks alot!!
    Rachel<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    Cute=)))

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is a good poem. Very emotional. Great job. I didn't know you like photography. I love it. And i didn't know you did karate. Me too. I'm a brown belt. Hopefully i can test for black next month. Well enough of that lol. Good poem. Have many more dreams like this. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    Good 4/5. i liked the whole image you created through this poem. but in the last/second last stanza your rhyme skeme changes.. but i think it was a very well put poem.

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