Nice rhyme scheme! luved itZ! 5/5!

This is very good, its extremly different to my style 5/5

Good 4/5. i liked the whole image you created through this poem. but in the last/second last stanza your rhyme skeme changes.. but i think it was a very well put poem.

This is a good poem. Very emotional. Great job. I didn't know you like photography. I love it. And i didn't know you did karate. Me too. I'm a brown belt. Hopefully i can test for black next month. Well enough of that lol. Good poem. Have many more dreams like this. 5/5
-vino

Cute=)))

WOW!! i LOVED this poem, it;s amazing and has a great flow. my fav. stanza was:

I cried in your arms,
What seemed like forever...
You wiped my tears,
And everything was better...

keep up the good work ur very talented. i;d love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks alot!!
Rachel<3

I loved the repitition of the word night and words that rhymed with it, this technique brought a unique sense of rhythm to the poem. Thanks for the comments, and I really like your work!