Leaving Me in Pain

by The Lonely Rose   Dec 31, 2006


Look at the way I am now..
And look at the way i was..
Did you mean to not care about me anymore..
All my restless calls..
All my cries for help when i was in need
Did you hear me..
Did you ever care..
Did you ever love me..

But wait...
When i told you all my calls..
All my cries for help when i was sad
Depressed
Angry
Upset
Happy
Excited
or any other emotion
All you said is sorry..
Sorry that your not good enough for me..
But i guess your too blind to see that your perfect in my eyes

I loved you
I cared for you
I gave you everything
I put you out of depression but now your back in it

Did you know that i still can't get you out of my head..
I get flashback about all we had and shared
I'm trying to get you out so i can move out and finally move on with my life....

Did you also know that my friend treated me badly...
She was my only friend around
Seems like she doesn't care..
I lost both of u

But do u seem to care..
no
Do you seem to notice..
no..
Because my sacrifice doesn't mean i feel pain
Well since you never told me that you move on..
You never told me that you don't love me anymore..
So that means you leave me in pain..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5 ur poem brings tears to my eyes. ur poems are all excellent and suit their genres really well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    Gabbi, ur so good. feel exactly what that poem is depicting... keep it up gurl!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Erm...I'm not all that sure what to say. It seemed more like a sympathy rant than anything. The truth is people do move on but if all you can do is sit in a tantrum about it then it's not good for anyone. I hope it got all the bottled up emotion out, because it was a very emotional piece.
    There are a few wording issues eg last line of third stanza, it should be "you're" In the fourth stanza it should be "flashbacks." Also, it's spelt "you" rather than "u." And you may want to capitalise your every "I" to make it gramatically correct.
    Keep writing, seems you have a lot of emotion inside of you.

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