My bloody valantine

by Danni   Dec 31, 2006


Pounding heart
thumping head
just got drunk now she\'s dead

red stained knife
gaping neck
i feel bad
she could not be kapt

spilling guts
bathing face
would hate for her to go to waste

i hated her face
she trusted mine
and thats the end of my valentine

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  • 17 years ago

    by Senko

    This is my kinda valentine's day idea...not that I'm a murderer, I just hate all that sappy crap.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Toxicin

    I like the flow and uniqueness of this writing.It is different and interesting.Keep it up.