I absolutely loved this poem, it's so great because it proves poems can be this good without rhyme. keep it up, check out some of poems if you have time.
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Very nice. I usually don't care for non-rhyming pieces. But this was good. Take a look at some of my poems if you have time. :) Best wishes and blessed be.

Beautiful, I hate how people comment but don't rate, so I will rate it 5/5

The poems full of emotions...as if you are about to have an anxiety attack...enjoyable read...keep up the good work 5/5 read my latest "GIFTS OF SORROW" "ARABIAN SANDS" "CROWN OF THORNS" comment and vote thank you