Aww...thats so sad! I loved the rhyme scheme and some of the imagery lyk "A monster capable of evil things
Who came along and broke our wings." well done! 5/5!

I'm sorry about your step-dad. I know the feeling. It is a really good poem.

Ohh...i'm really sorry about what your step-dad is doing to you....but you are a great poet...keep it up!

Beautiful poem... written straight from the heart. you have a lot of talent, keep writing. 5/5 all the way.