I liked this poem!
It was very good!
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(check out any of mine if u want)

Very nice. *5/5

Wow!! loved it !!! i especially loved the title! hehe .. =p

5/5

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Lol yeh my poem is about how i was abused as a child and people would ask me if anything happened and i would lie and say no. it's confusing tho. u kinda have 2 get wots in my head, lol. i like this poem of ur's too. it's also heaps easy to read i like them like that. 5/5
thanks for the comment

Wow you are so awesome! i love your vocabulary. you have amazing words in your poems and you have such an amazing talent never stop writing chica!

Y does it seem to me that u hav been used and abused by ppl.....

What a twisted shadow
The lights cast,
Dancing ghosts are all that
Remains of my past.

i have had a harsh past, not because i was abused but because i was simply an emotional and depressed child. when i look back most of my memories arent all that happy, and if they are then they are kinda happy sad. i wrote a poem about it - but i think this poem portrays the emotions really well. i love the way that you always use imaginative and different words. it is like every poem is unique.

Thank u so much i have read all ov ure poems omg i cnt beleve i am talkinf 2 u lol thank u so much hear if u have msn faye_343@msn.com

I don't like to talk about my past, or think about it, so i suppress things, and thats why i write things like that, my dreams are much worse though, that might have been sad but they are horrifying, i loved your poem and and the part at the end about not being able to get back up was a fitting end.

how can such an angel fall?
when she may never had wings at all?
on the razor throne killing my time
i still feel them tearing off mine...

Very good poem, thank you for commenting on mine! 5/5 keep it up(=

Jeanette

This poem is truly amazing... the flow of the words and the emotion is so deep...

Great job. Keep up the good work. Thnx 4 ur cmnt. Ur doing great. 2 weeks is a while. Ive stoppd for a lil over a month. Im proud of myself and you too. Keep n touch luv always brittany

Groovy, the last verse is really good because it's singing to me :). laura xx

Groovy, the last verse is really good because it's singing to me :). laura xx

This poem is amazing ... It sounds like you have happiness in ur life but you sometimes feel depression.

I could very much relate to this poem and it really hit me hard. Excellent work!

~jas~

Sometimes those ghosts come back to haunt you......

:'[. So sad. I enjoyed this poem also. I think instead of doing 7 im going to do all your top poems you have (not the latest i cant see them ]: computer is messed up)