I love u for ever n even after that

Thanks for sharing.

Now there's a personal letter with everything about you written in the words. I didn't feel it was very poetic, but more of an explanation to him. You said things, and they were beautiful things...But I wouldn't classify it as poetry. I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just saying I would love to see you challenge yourself with something more... constructed together... I can't think of the right word right now, but I hope you know what I mean. Some formal style, or paragraphing, or rhyme and rhythm... You are very capable of expressing yourself, and I would love to see how well you could tackle putting all your words into a beautiful style that's all your own - in a more 'poetically constructed' way...
Man I hope that makes sense.