Comments : Walk away

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I thought the flow and rhyme in this poem was very good. I really don't have a suggestion because I pretty much liked it as is. You could feel the heat behind this, almost as if you were angry when you typed it. It sounds as if it just flowed from you onto the screen. Good job Broken Promises!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Norbert

    I like that poem. real good.