by Broken Promises Dec 31, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Everything was good |
by youngNinLuv
I Luv It, it's awesome! |
by *Charisma*
Good job. Minus a few minor things in flow, these two lines are the only ones I would suggest editing, because they are way longer than the rest and throw off the flow to such a nice poem. |