by Emi
Omgosh joe,thats so beautiful.well done |
by Bryan
This is another great poem, lots of emotions in this one joe, i know exactly how you feel, ive been there too, it will get better, but this is a very good poem, 5/5!!! |
by Cindy
Excellent job. I love the way you write aout the heart of an angel. |
by Cyma Khan
Very nice poem ....5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
The message in the poem, beautifull and sweet. but the poem i think could be tweeked. not sure how though. i still liked the poem. |
by *Isolde*
Wow great job 5/5 I love the way you wrote and ..like it was comforting...and the words you used was great...keep it up. |
by debbylyn
This is so sweet Joe.... |
Awwww such a sweet poem Joe =] very well written and it just flowed all to begining and end. 5/5 |
by Alessandro
Absoluetly Brilliant |
by Mousie
Aww omg i loved it! it was soooo cute, something i can totally relate to, i have some people in my life like that... it had a great flow even though it didn't rhyme, which some of the greatest poems don't even rhyme... i loved the wording and the idea behind it, really a nice poem for you, yet again. 5/5 |
by hippiehxc
OMFG. Joe, I cried. This is so SWEET. |
This is another fine example of a passionate love poem with astronomical and heavenly metaphors flowing straight from your heart wild and free. |
Great poem, would love to know where you got the inspiration for this poem, it is brilliant. Just thinking actually, is this a poem showing how much you care for someone, but masking their identity and existance with the use of an angel? just a thought, great powem 5/5 |
by Mommy And Me
Over all this poem was a good poem, but at some places it seemed you were missing a word or two |
by Kalee
This is a beautiful poem. i hope the girl who it is about realises how much she was appreciated. 5/5 |
by Jenni
I don't see how anyone can give this poem less than a 5/5, becuase it is simply amazing. i love your collaboration of words, just marvelous! |
by Jenni Marie
I thought this was beautiful. |
by Leanne
Great and beautiful poem!! |
by Roxy
Joe, this is a really sweet person. The person who once you where with is a very lucky girl and is really special to make you love her with so much tender care. This poem showed alot of passion through it!! One of the best ive read so far!! |