by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Uh oh... |
by DeathlyAmore
Travis. Its a fair poem. Your view point was seen. Emotions were seen as well. But theres no... Nothing excactly new. It was based on a moment between you and that other person. But why does it mean so much to you? only because you love her? You should of added More words. give me something i can be WOWED!!!. you know? its not poor. but it aint that good either. Its fair. KEEP WRITING!. |