Comments : Cry

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Beautifully sad and true. Well done

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I really really loved that first line. It had a lot of power and earnestness. Way to capture an audience!

    I never thought I would hear the word "smog" in a poem, but that's a part of your message, so you can make it work.