The title needs work. The title is good. But it needs some changing. I was not a big fan of the start. i thought it was fair. The second paragraph was not so good either.. but the last one was Gorgeous. It yelled your emotions and feeling towards me! It told me what you felt. and what you cant stop feeling towards this person. That is the essential essence you need in every love poem. though you didint have a very good start. you managed to pull it off with those words
"Always will
And I still
I need you in my heart"
Astonishing. Good work. Voted 4/5

This is really good! Lots of emotion!
5/5
xoxo