I it's just meant,
For things to end,
When it comes down to,
Involving someone like me.

the I at the top, i dont get it.

and the second time you said screwed, not a good word. reword it. its not horrible, but it doesnt fit too much poeticly; my opinion.

and "with me at my feet crying."
i think im missing that. i get the meaning. but its like...idk. with my head down crying. idk.

however, i thin this poem has got to be one of ur best. i love it.