Awww Chels this poem is such a tear jerker .... so sad yet so true in many ways.

Girl when you are old enough to have kids of your own, you are going to be a terrific mom ..... I just know it.
But hey .... no rushing for that to happen eh .... lol.... just a little advice from Momma .

Love ya Sweetpea, you have managed to start my new year off with a tear in my eye. And some great advice in an ending stanza.

I love it, I don't have any kids, but i pretty much call my sisters my kids i get called "Mini Mommy" and i know what it feels like to yell at them but they just wanted to tell you "I love you" It hurts it sucks you feel like crap.

Yea i can relate 2 this poem wit mi sister.. i always blow her away n now she blows the youngest one away... itsz nice.. Good WorK!
~*~*~* ALIYSIA~*~*~*

Wow I loved it. The flow was excellent. And it had alot of meaning. Good job, 5/5

Chelsey
I thank God everyday for blessing me with my son. I was never to busy for him. Housework could wait. What did it matter that there were dishes in the sink or the vaccum needed ran. It would still be there later. Our children grow up to fast. I was there for him. Now he is there for me. Now I have his children to love and I can see the way he loves them and it reminds me of myself :) What a great piece.
Take Care Cindy

Wow i will never give out to my son again after reading this poen it is excellent

please comment on mine i would love to hear what you have to say about them
you are such a great writer you do it so well

look 4ward 2 hearing from you

thanks amanda :}

I can't belive how wonderful you are at wirting btw my name it chelsey too lol 5/5 keep it up

Nice poem!!

read my poems please
thankyou!

Very nice your deffinetly very talented

Aww wow this poem is really nice. I like it alot. Its great advice, im going to use in the future (after all i'm only 15 years old). I'm sure your son turned out to be smart and successful, so just move on =) Great poem

This poem reminds us to cherish each day. Time is not promised to anyone. Very insightful to be so young. Very Good Job!

Chelsey
Excellent choice by Rachel for her pick of your poems. Congrats for being featured writer of the week:)
Love Cindy

This poem was absolutely amazing.
There's so much emotion in every word.
I love it.
And the lesson inside of it is extremely valuable.

5/5 from me.
Great work. :]

Oh Darling chels,Why must you put tears in my eyes,?
Just wandering around
Came across this.
BEAUTIFUL!

That is so true ... a life lesson right here !

I cried over this poem, so touching. 5/5