by kelley Jan 1, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Quivering quietly |
GREAT ALLITERATION!!! heres another tip USE COMMAS there necessary they add DRAMA to poetry use them lol lol but i love this one the best AMAZING. please comment mine if u can thnxs. |
by emptysole
I like this one but agree u should add to it keep it up :) |
by hagar
Keep going |