Let them burn to the very last thing- doesnt flow as well.

but the imagery, the word choice. i liked that a lot.

Great choice of words.i really liked it.

Very well written piece. Good word choices. Your sadness comes through in this poem. Your talent shines through in your poems.

I agree, good choice of words. I can realli c how ur feeling. keep writing! 5/5!

I like the wording in this poem..the flow was not as good as i hoped it would be but it still showed emotion so i liked it. it was nice..keep up the good work

Very nice! I love the imagery in this poem. I think you did a very good job choosing your words because they all came together so well. Well, nothing to suggest to make this better, cos it's already fine the way it is =P
Great job!
5/5

Wow Noni, I've always been blown away by your writting, and this is no exception. This was utterly beautiful, the description and imagery were so clear and perfect. The flow and rhymes were flawless, and I really can't find anything negative to say about this poem. Great work darling.

--Steph