by Violet Jan 1, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Don't you just hate it when people think that your life is perfect? |
by Cella Bella
Very good. Like it's already been said you put the reader there in your poem. Very good imagery. 5/5 |
I like the way that you wrote this, it spells it all out, and yet.. leaves somthing to chance.. good job |
by Shelly
I love this poem!!! it is awesome... your a really talented writter you can create an image in others mind and yea its great |
by jason
Its good very interesting = ] and havnt seen a writing style like yours in awhile |
by Ruthie
Huny that was lovely :) loved the painting imaging. just fantastic. keep it up *grins* |