Huny that was lovely :) loved the painting imaging. just fantastic. keep it up *grins*

ruthie xoxo

Its good very interesting = ] and havnt seen a writing style like yours in awhile

I love this poem!!! it is awesome... your a really talented writter you can create an image in others mind and yea its great

I like the way that you wrote this, it spells it all out, and yet.. leaves somthing to chance.. good job

Very good. Like it's already been said you put the reader there in your poem. Very good imagery. 5/5

marcella