Well done! I luved this poem! uve deffinatly got talent! 5/5!

Wow. amazing.
my favorite stanza: And even at times,
When it evades me,
Even love loses it's truth,
When people toss the word around.

the word evade. nice vocab.

but fix the rules, find synonyms that make it flow. and the last stanza, seems a lil diff. idk. doesnt fit completely. take it out. its fine without it.