I love this poem, it rings true for me. why should you be bothered what others think this old women is obviously happy, i know she's not real but this poem manages to make you think she is! well done

It was a good poem, I wish you made it longer :) Just a suggestion to use more imagery in it :) or some metaphors.

But anyway I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

An interesting theory and i believe its a good one nice poem it was actually funny to me 5/5

It actually is based on a lady where i live.
shes got some sort of mental illness and she just spends her time dancing on the street.
She dosent care what people think
she is literally lost in her own world.